Lastly, I personally didn't like how the Alliance was set up nor the amount of power they had, which we just took at face value that they were the good guys and corruption was not possible inside it, I know it wasn't the point of the story but to me it would have fleshed out the world more to see people react differently to the alliance and have their members bicker and fight as normal people would do in the same situation, I felt that everything went too smoothly for the good guys.Īlthough I have given quite a lot of criticism, if anyone is reading at this point I also point out the good that I got from the book. I understand that adding new characters and making old ones into more primary characters will result in less time for other characters but Olivia and Roy are arguably the other 2 MCs when Jason is doing his own thing. We never got to see Olivia actually train with his mentor or even got a POV from her perspective before the final battle that I recall. The character interactions felt either very forced or monotonous, and Jason barely interacted with Roy and Olivia compared to the other books which it was a highlight for me in this series. This kind of events that were set up in the previous books makes them feel cheap and unearned, I loved that Jason had to face depression and anxiety from the stress of being brought back but it could have been fleshed out more in this book as well as the others, it didn't came out of nowhere to me but I feel it could have had more depth to it. Are rushed and not given enough time and effort to flesh them out. Several storylines like Roy healing his uncle (which happened 'off screen' and we only learn after its done), Olivia confronting his father, Cay Wolf himself not being as much of a threat in order to give Jason an epiphany, etc. I never got the feeling that Jason was overpowered he was more knowledgeable however which allowed him to progress faster and more efficiently, we see this in the first book when he fought that first field boss he just targeted its weak spot not used overwhelmingly strength, he was lucky and did get powerups but I felt at the core his character was more like a person who gives their all and is rewarded by their hardwork. If by any chance the author sees this review I want to point out that I am not hating on this book I'm trying to express how it made me feel and try to give constructive feedback, feel free to ignore this however.

I finished the third book the same day it came out! lol but I wanted some more time to digest it and figure out how I felt and gotta say that I agree with a lot of what is being said in the review, I wouldn't put it as a 1-star review but I do see the points being made.

Towers of heaven book 2 cameron milan